I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo E Lelei, Ema! It's Amanda from Room 9 and your outstanding digital portrait caught my eyes. I see you've created a digital portrait of Jennie Kim from Blackpink, you've actually done a good job coming from a girl who just began using her Chromebook. I've attempted doing this portrait and it didn't turn out as good as yours.
Kia Ora, it's me Helisa from room nine. First of all, I would just like to say, that this is a beautiful peice of digital potrait. It coudn't have been better. There is only one thing I would suggest though. The only thing I'd consider would be to add a little story to it, so it can be a bit mroe interesting. But, other than that, the drawing itself is amazing !
Malo E Lelei, Ema! It's Amanda from Room 9 and your outstanding digital portrait caught my eyes. I see you've created a digital portrait of Jennie Kim from Blackpink, you've actually done a good job coming from a girl who just began using her Chromebook. I've attempted doing this portrait and it didn't turn out as good as yours.
ReplyDeleteYours sincerely, Amanda.
Kia Ora, it's me Helisa from room nine. First of all, I would just like to say, that this is a beautiful peice of digital potrait. It coudn't have been better. There is only one thing I would suggest though. The only thing I'd consider would be to add a little story to it, so it can be a bit mroe interesting. But, other than that, the drawing itself is amazing !
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