I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ema I like your post about description based on a picture feedback. Maybe next time you could make sure all the writing fits on the page. Keep up the good work Ema. Maty Ahipara school.
Hi Ema I like your post about description based on a picture feedback. Maybe next time you could make sure all the writing fits on the page. Keep up the good work Ema. Kyrhan Ahipara school
Hi Ema I like your post about description based on a picture . Maybe next time you could make sure all the writing fits on the page. Keep up the good work Ema.Kryzma Ahipara school.
Great job on your blog post. I like how you have added pictures to show what you are writing about. I think you did a wonderful job sharing your work. Keep up the good effort.
Hi Ema this is me Gunveen. The discription you have given about the sandy desert thirst is really very good. keep up the good work.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ema I like your post about description based on a picture feedback. Maybe next time you could make sure all the writing fits on the page. Keep up the good work Ema. Kyrhan Ahipara school
ReplyDeleteHi Ema I like your post about description based on a picture . Maybe next time you could make sure all the writing fits on the page. Keep up the good work Ema.Kryzma Ahipara school.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on your blog post. I like how you have added pictures to show what you are writing about. I think you did a wonderful job sharing your work. Keep up the good effort.
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