I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ema Thank you for sharing this on your blog. It will be great to see how this persuasive writing develops as you continue to work on it throughout this week. Have you ever seen a dog at a train station? I have seen a guide dog at a train station once.
Hi Ema my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I really like your Persuasive argument called "Dogs should be banned at train stations". Next time you could maybe add a WALT and not to0 many images. Keep up the GREAT WORK!
Kia ora Ema
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this on your blog. It will be great to see how this persuasive writing develops as you continue to work on it throughout this week. Have you ever seen a dog at a train station? I have seen a guide dog at a train station once.
Hi Ema my name is Dakota from Ahipara School. I really like your Persuasive argument called "Dogs should be banned at train stations". Next time you could maybe add a WALT and not to0 many images. Keep up the GREAT WORK!
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