I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ema, thank you for sharing your persuasive writing. I like how you have used rhetorical questions to help persuade your reader. Have you had to learn an instrument before?
Hey it's Miro G from Paroa school. This is a great argument it is very persuasive.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could put this into a speech?
Kia ora Ema, thank you for sharing your persuasive writing. I like how you have used rhetorical questions to help persuade your reader. Have you had to learn an instrument before?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Roya,
DeleteThank you for commenting, but yes I have learnt a instrument which is ukulele and piano.