I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ema I´m Roscoe from Ahipara School and I like your writing about this ruby players sinning the National anthem. What you could do next time is to try and add some more punctuation. amazing job from Roscoe
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ReplyDeleteHi Ema I´m Roscoe from Ahipara School and I like your writing about this
ReplyDeleteruby players sinning the National anthem. What you could do next time is to try and add some more punctuation. amazing job from Roscoe