I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ema , this is Ilaisaane I love that you were so brave to do something at camp that you didn't want to do because it was high and you were terrified of heights. Well Done!
Kai pai for giving Ema a really supportive and positive comment. I agree with you. Ema was incredibly brave for doing the high ropes, especially when she was terrified of heights. Would you recommend anything that Ema could improve on? ‘
Remember to improve on our learning we need feedback from others in what we can change or add for our next post. But great comments!
Edmund Hillary School is on such a roll! You guys are all doing such an amazing job, are you doing the activities in class? As you may remember, Im a blog commenter for the Summer Learning journey, in fact It’s my second year doing this! I have just completed my degree in teaching. If you want to learn more about me check out my blog!
I really love the creative Google Slide that you have made. You have added pictures, text boxes and you have put your information into different slides- kai pai! I also really like how you included a simile ‘I was scared as a cat could be’, in fact this whole recall is of great detail. You should be proud of yourself for doing the high ropes, especially if you are scared of heights. Would you do the high ropes again? Let me know!
I cannot wait to read more of your creative and thoughtful blog posts!
Hi Ema , this is Ilaisaane I love that you were so brave to do something at camp that you didn't want to do because it was high and you were terrified of heights. Well Done!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ilaisaane,
DeleteKai pai for giving Ema a really supportive and positive comment. I agree with you. Ema was incredibly brave for doing the high ropes, especially when she was terrified of heights. Would you recommend anything that Ema could improve on? ‘
Remember to improve on our learning we need feedback from others in what we can change or add for our next post. But great comments!
Cheers,
Georgia
Kia ora Ema,
ReplyDeleteEdmund Hillary School is on such a roll! You guys are all doing such an amazing job, are you doing the activities in class? As you may remember, Im a blog commenter for the Summer Learning journey, in fact It’s my second year doing this! I have just completed my degree in teaching. If you want to learn more about me check out my blog!
I really love the creative Google Slide that you have made. You have added pictures, text boxes and you have put your information into different slides- kai pai! I also really like how you included a simile ‘I was scared as a cat could be’, in fact this whole recall is of great detail. You should be proud of yourself for doing the high ropes, especially if you are scared of heights. Would you do the high ropes again? Let me know!
I cannot wait to read more of your creative and thoughtful blog posts!
Blog you later,
Georgia