I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Your slide show is awesome, I really like the design of having your diary entry look like it's actually in a journal. The prison you have described sounds like a scary place. I think your note at the end, to make good choices is a good touch. Mandela had an amazing life and story, he would have suffered in prison for a long 18 years but didn't give up because he knew that his cause was right. Did you find this activity interesting?
Tēnā koe Ema,
ReplyDeleteYour slide show is awesome, I really like the design of having your diary entry look like it's actually in a journal. The prison you have described sounds like a scary place. I think your note at the end, to make good choices is a good touch. Mandela had an amazing life and story, he would have suffered in prison for a long 18 years but didn't give up because he knew that his cause was right. Did you find this activity interesting?
See you in the comments.
Daniel :)