I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ema, This is Joshua and I just want to congratulate you for making this amazing poem. I hope that you could make another some time and make it BTB apart from that it looks great keep up the great work.
I like how you're scared and 'shakily talking' but then also as brave as a bear. I love how you had the first line and then just ran with and went with the rhymes that popped into your head. That's a really great way to get a lot of creative ideas out.
I hope you have enjoyed the SLJ tasks you've done so far. It’s been a while since you’ve posted but hopefully you’ll give some more a go.
Hi Ema,
ReplyDeleteThis is Joshua and I just want to congratulate you for making this amazing poem. I hope that you could make another some time and make it BTB apart from that it looks great keep up the great work.
Kia Ora Joshua, Thank you for complimenting my poem for SLJ!
DeleteTēnā koe Ema,
ReplyDeleteI like how you're scared and 'shakily talking' but then also as brave as a bear. I love how you had the first line and then just ran with and went with the rhymes that popped into your head. That's a really great way to get a lot of creative ideas out.
I hope you have enjoyed the SLJ tasks you've done so far. It’s been a while since you’ve posted but hopefully you’ll give some more a go.
See you in the comments soon.
Daniel :D