I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for completing another SLJ activity. WOW— your beast 'The Behind Beast' sounds very scary and vengeful. It saddens me that your beast hates humans because of the murder of his family. The Behind Beast sounds very lonely, and scary! The Behind Beast has hair that goes all the way down to his legs, with sharpened teeth which make him look like a vampire. I wonder if his hair ever gets in the way? I wouldn't want to cross your beast, that's for sure!
Nice work adding in some images to show us what your beast looks like, and for attributing those images. Would you be interested in bringing your beast to life? You can draw your beast on paper and upload a photo, or create a digital drawing!
Keep up the good work, Ema! I look forward to hearing your response.
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ReplyDeleteTēnā Koe Ema!
ReplyDeleteThank you for completing another SLJ activity.
WOW— your beast 'The Behind Beast' sounds very scary and vengeful. It saddens me that your beast hates humans because of the murder of his family. The Behind Beast sounds very lonely, and scary! The Behind Beast has hair that goes all the way down to his legs, with sharpened teeth which make him look like a vampire. I wonder if his hair ever gets in the way?
I wouldn't want to cross your beast, that's for sure!
Nice work adding in some images to show us what your beast looks like, and for attributing those images. Would you be interested in bringing your beast to life? You can draw your beast on paper and upload a photo, or create a digital drawing!
Keep up the good work, Ema!
I look forward to hearing your response.
Thanks,
Jordan