I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job at completing another SLJ activity. WOW— You have put a lot of effort into the presentation for this activity. Thank you for detailing the process of making French fries. From reading your method, I think I could confidently make French fries at home. I really enjoy how you have explained how to make the seasoning. This is a VERY important part, don't you think? Yum. You're making me hungry! I see you have including pictures of McDonalds fries. Are McDonalds fries your favourite?
I really like the effort you have put into the presentation of this post. Keep up the great blogging! I look forward to hearing your response.
Tēnā Koe Ema!
ReplyDeleteGreat job at completing another SLJ activity. WOW— You have put a lot of effort into the presentation for this activity. Thank you for detailing the process of making French fries. From reading your method, I think I could confidently make French fries at home. I really enjoy how you have explained how to make the seasoning. This is a VERY important part, don't you think? Yum. You're making me hungry!
I see you have including pictures of McDonalds fries. Are McDonalds fries your favourite?
I really like the effort you have put into the presentation of this post. Keep up the great blogging!
I look forward to hearing your response.
Thanks,
Jordan